Help me get his right!!!

I'm stuck here, working on a comic. Going backwards and forwards tearing my hair out trying to make a decision on how this should look.

So, in one of the opening pages you see that she is clearly sitting on a mans face who's head is resting on her chair, or possibly magically merged within the cushion.

As the scene progresses, I want to show it in more detail, but still get across to the reader, that the chair is there. Now usually, I’d set it to transparent, and have an outline of the chair there. But as the table is transparent glass. I don't want to confuse the reader into thinking the chair has suddenly turned into glass. 

so out of these options, which do you think is best. In terms of looks, and in terms of getting the point across.

You may have noticed the characters have changed a little. I'll comment more on that when the comics completed.

Dion University: The New Girl 4K

 I know the quality dipped; noticeable with her shirt. I converted the uniform to work on her, a new-generation model. Unfortunately, it didn’t work out too great, and I can only do so much in Photoshop.  Hopefully, the original asset creator will release an update to fix the collar and skirt issues so that the uniform works well with Genesis 9. Until then, don’t expect to see this character in the same setting. If she ever appears again.

I tried changing the font to one more comic-like. But that’s caused punctuation to go out the window. The font not only doesn’t have any lowercase letters, it also doesn’t have apostrophes.
This means that abbreviated words such as he’ll will appear as hell.

I know this is a lot different from the usual; There’s no denial, chastity, edging, sex, ball-busting, etc. But I figured in a world with magic a lot of other stuff can happen too. And maybe being denied, blocked, or edged isn’t that bad by comparison.

BTW. This comic is set before Miss Taylor becomes Dion University’s principal.

The next comic(s) will go back to the usual content. And my next post is most likely going to be a while.

As usual, feel free to comment.

 

Step-Dads and Step-Daughters: Free Coffee

I was going to wrap this comic up bringing it to a conclusive end. But I decided against it at the last minute. I’m not sure when the second part will come out. I still need to finish part one of the chastity gang. And maybe create a new tab on this blog called abandoned projects, to post the things that almost made it, as requested by somebody who commented. Criticism, suggestions, compliments, and comments are always welcome.